Feedback from the class and Neville

Given todays society i was advised to swap the word ‘perves’ with another less offensive word. I also voiced my ideas of recreating the substrates  as people you met in a night club as i intend to design this booklet for university students. Neville suggest to give the night idea a continuous story, e.g. each substrate is a different kind of drunk each night.

I played with this idea for a long time but came to the decision that i couldn’t keep a storyline through out all the substrates and that it may confuse matters more. My conclusion is to keep it simple and to avoid making the substrates a focus of a storyline, therefore the students are more likely to remember the rhymes for the order of the substrates and enzymes.

Advertisements

Leave a Reply

Fill in your details below or click an icon to log in:

WordPress.com Logo

You are commenting using your WordPress.com account. Log Out / Change )

Twitter picture

You are commenting using your Twitter account. Log Out / Change )

Facebook photo

You are commenting using your Facebook account. Log Out / Change )

Google+ photo

You are commenting using your Google+ account. Log Out / Change )

Connecting to %s